Out takes from my novel: WHAT DO YOU THINK?

Your writing is very good for your age, way before your time. I am not sure that it is my kind of story, but I am sure that your plot will appeal to certain people, who knows, I might like it, if I had read it from beginning through. Keep up the awesome work! We have a Stephanie Myer in the making. Your character descriptions are done well, it is so important when introducing or talking about someone. You should make a career of this in the future, if it is what you really love!